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Forever In Love
Contributed by
M-L
on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 04:25:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A kiss from a fake angel
it's quite easy to see
where this love's going
on the side, it's killing me.
But I won't let go
it ain't never easy to,
though, it might be for the best
but it's my mistake to do.
I can't leave her alone,
she's looking so sad
with a tear in her eye
my job is to hold her hand.
Forever in love,
that's the idea
but how many can do
such an insane thing?
Copyright ©
M-L
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2008-06-05 16:25:28]
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Re: Forever In Love
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 04:49:10 PM AEST
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Sometimes we know something is not good for us, but we continue with it because it makes us feel good. I know I do,, Nice write..
Welcome to YPDC.... Hope you enjoy it here....
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Re: Forever In Love
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by shelby on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 08:51:33 AM AEST
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I mirror what Jenni just said to a tee.
Thought provoking write and nicely done.
There does come the time when we realize enough is enough. It is a trade off I guess......... Keep going on the roller coaster ride with people who are not real and take our hearts through the shredder or end it for good and move on.. I am choosing the latter with several people right now and you know what?? It feels good already am feeling a weight lifted.
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Re: Forever In Love
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by elle on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 03:32:04 AM AEST
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| I consider both forever & never the fabulous misnomers of our time. . . wala & tada. I like your words. peace. elle |
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