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I Don't Understand...
Contributed by
xoBrokenxo
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Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 07:14:34 AM in AEST
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Every time I sit down to write something,
You become the main topic.
I write about what you did to me,
How you used me like a mere toy.
It’s funny, though.
Everything I went through,
Everything I did to myself…
Everyone knows about it.
Except you.
I don’t know if it’s because you don’t want to believe it’s true.
Or if you just don’t care.
Do you just think I wouldn’t dare?
I could, you know, end this life.
It wouldn’t be very hard on my part.
You’ve already done most of the damage by breaking my heart.
You, however, don’t know that either.
God, I’m so sick of being so bitter.
I don’t understand how I can love you still,
But yet hate you at the same time.
I don’t understand how one person can affect your life so much.
Especially someone like you.
I don’t understand how every time I try to write something,
The finished product is always about you.
Copyright ©
xoBrokenxo
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2008-06-05 07:14:34]
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Re: I Don't Understand...
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by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 07:36:37 AM AEST
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This is a very painful write ...
consider this:
The greatest gift you can give yourself is forgiveness ... the ability to forgive the person who hurt you so will set you free ... only then will you be able to move on.
Peace
~Shannon |
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Re: I Don't Understand...
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by PhantomVampyress on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 09:20:49 AM AEST
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this is a painful yet beautifully expressed write.. I agree with what shans has said.. its very true..
You will be able to see past this some day and you will have learned something.. so at least the pain isn't in vain.. beautiful expression here
rock on,
vampyress jenni |
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Re: I Don't Understand...
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by Chrissylee on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 07:57:22 PM AEST
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| I've been through this.. its going to take you alot of writing before you will finally get over this person. Once you find true happiness with that one special person then you will forget the one that hurt you and concentrate on the one that is showing you the right sort of love and kindness that you rightfully deserve, great write keep em coming |
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Re: I Don't Understand...
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by elle on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 03:46:50 AM AEST
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| the outer always reflects the inner. it's really about you. dig deeper. peace. elle |
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