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happy sad
Contributed by
lozzalovesu
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Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 07:02:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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if a happiness poem could bring forth a smile
my face would always dress in style
if ears could hear my computer screen
from one to the other they too would grin
my keyboard types for my eyes not my tongue
this happiness poem will never be sung
but what of my eyes? dont they shine?
yes but not from this poem of mine
the pen is mighter than the sword
but a pen can write only words
the feelings i sense and the senses i feel
for keyboard and screen remain far to real
but if this happiness poem could make me smile
my face would forever be dressed in style
XXX
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Re: happy sad
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 08:08:19 AM AEST
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| well if you don't like it thats your own thing i often don't like my work either but this was very good full of.... everything very nice write |
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Re: happy sad
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 08:53:18 AM AEST
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Hi Lauren, This is an amazing poem..I really love it a lot.... Great work... I;m sorry about your cousin..That must have been a very painful experience....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: happy sad
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by elle on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 03:54:52 AM AEST
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dear lozzalovesu,
I am so sorry for the loss your cousin. tragic & so hard on you & everyone involved. God bless you & your family. your words are a tribute to the happiness in life. that cannot always be understood or accepted by everyone. somewhere inside us all, we are seeking relief. for some it is not found here. . . again blessings for you. your words are good. peace. elle |
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