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I'm sorry
Contributed by
SOCALGIRL
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Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 01:54:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I知 sorry that I cry so much
I don稚 mean to whine
I知 sorry I complain too much
I知 always asking why
I知 sorry I知 so annoying
I知 just frustrated not knowing
I 僧 so excited to start our life together
It痴 the beginning of forever
Forever far from here, we shall always be near
Near to each other because we love one another
Many joys are to come as long as we remain one
Joys and sometimes sorrows but we must remember there is always tomorrow
Help me be strong for I am weak
I need you to shelter me
I need you to hold
I need to hug me and I need you to love me
Please be patient for I am trying
Trying to be the wife you are desiring
Copyright ﾂｩ
SOCALGIRL
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2008-06-05 01:54:33]
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Re: I'm sorry
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 02:05:17 AM AEST
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Ahhhh this is sweet. Have you shown it to him??
I find that when things get the worst it is when we need to pull closer to our mates not pull away.... or turn to another for comfort.
Love is like glue at times, it holds everything together when around you everything else is coming apart. I do not know where Id be right now without my man, we have gone through hell and back together and keep right on going the word being together.
Lovely write and welcome to YPDC
Michelle
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Re: I'm sorry
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by ZiggyB on
Friday, 6th June 2008 @ 02:24:34 AM AEST
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Shelby is right about this...when you love each another...you will always be able to find comfort in your loved ones.
Nice piece of work here. |
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Re: I'm sorry
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 01:51:35 AM AEST
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I think you have no need to worry about your love, it certainly seems strong.
"Trying to be the wife you are desiring" ?......if you are true to yourself you will be that person.
Steve |
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