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Put a heart in your left hand
Contributed by
holy
on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 07:35:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Put a heart in your left hand
"I put a heart in your left hand,
you told me you won't let it go.
you said you would can feel my gentleness any time,
and you won't be tired and bored on a long and arduous way,
you believed everything there would be very easy......"
"You left a heart in my right hand,
I told you I won't let it get lost.
I said it will make me better,
and I will not be cowed down by any difficulty,
I believed I will be more pretty......"
"Please remember your promise,
let my heart with you together,
a thing of beauty is a joy forever.
Don't worry,
come hell and high water,
I will be there."
"I will never forget my promise,
I will not feel lonely.
Although all sorts of problems will assail me suddenly,
don't worry,
have your care,
I will face all problems with courage."
"Our feelings are interlinked,
all the happiness prevail in our mind,
I am in your hand,
you are in my hand.
When we live together,
our life and love will be prefecter."
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holy
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2008-06-04 19:35:48]
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Re: Put a heart in your left hand
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by shelby on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 01:52:05 AM AEST
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Yet again you have brought life to the page with poetic talent and your hearts full of love.
I wish you many blessings hun
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Re: Put a heart in your left hand
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 7th June 2008 @ 01:56:11 PM AEST
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I like your style. It's unexpected; it gives the language a little more life to see it used so spontaneously. Do keep it up.
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