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Twisted
Contributed by
maggot
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Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 07:02:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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You could see it in his eyes
The hate and the evil
How is it that he became so twisted and evil
He was normal....
Or atleast everyone thought he was
it started a month after his parents died
All of the bizarh behavioh
At first his little obsession with cleaness got out of hand
And then the mysterious "phone calls"
Then the all of the mysterious murders started
No one knew who was doing it
but they knew one thing
they where all wearing blue at the time
ANd they were killed by one hard blow the the back of the head
people then started to suspect him
and then i caught him in the act
i didn't want to believe that it was him
My boyfriend the twisted killer
Or should i say killers
he had an alter ego known as blue
that who all the "Phone callls" were to
now mike is dead washed out to sea some where
Because i put one to many sleeping pills in his coffee
And left him by the sea
but i didn't mean for him to die
i ionly wanted him to be a bit dopey
incase he tried anything
but instead his gone
Forever......
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2008-06-04 07:02:42]
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Re: Twisted
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 07:26:03 AM AEST
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Wow this tale gave me a chill or two.
It is an exciting write, well done.
Other than a few type o's and spelling boo boo's it is a great write.
We all make those little mistakes.. Our poetry is better without them though. (smiles)
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Re: Twisted
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by ingeniusidiot on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 10:08:27 PM AEST
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Gave me a chill or two...interesting story. You did a really good job.
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Re: Twisted
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by SOCALGIRL on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 02:10:37 AM AEST
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| Great story/poem. I really enjoyed it. |
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