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~Self-Destruction ~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 05:45:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Leaving her sanctuary
to journey along an unknown highway.
Alone on a path of self-destruction
Unsure of the destination
Blinded by pain and ignorance
she builds a wall between herself
And those who care for her
She creates false images in her mind.
She perceives shadows that are not there
If only she knew, where this road was leading,
her journey would be less of a drag.
At present, she feels less useful
than a dirty piece of rag.
~~*~~
03.06.08
Jenni_K
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Jenni_K
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2008-06-04 05:45:08]
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Re: ~Self-Destruction ~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 05:55:13 AM AEST
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Jenni,
Wonderful poem! Some times we fall, but we keep getting back up, don't we?>>>>>>Mike |
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Re: ~Self-Destruction ~
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 06:05:17 AM AEST
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The unknown path is a new adventure.
The wall is merely a safety net.
Images are hope and dreams.
Enjoy the new adventure, where ever it leads.
Never useless.... the dirt on the rag is a reminder of where you have been.
Such a sad write for you my friend. You are deeply cared for here and we are here for you.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~Self-Destruction ~
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by Bubbles02 on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 06:15:31 AM AEST
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Good write. I'm sure many of us can relate.
~Bubbles |
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Re: ~Self-Destruction ~
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 06:35:44 AM AEST
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OH how I know this, unknown journey and highways.
Look at this as the great adventure you may be surprised what you may find.
I hope you are ok??? If you need me I am here.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: ~Self-Destruction ~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 08:17:00 AM AEST
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| building a wall between you and the people that care for you.... it never comes out good if this happened to you i'm dearly sorry it is hard to go through great poem though |
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Re: ~Self-Destruction ~
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 09:17:46 AM AEST
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Well jen,
She best gather back her self worth cause the she that I know is very strong and capable of
doing any thing in her future that she sets her mind too.
Good work girl. You've captured your subject well.
Big huggs, luv, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: ~Self-Destruction ~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 08:13:26 PM AEST
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OH hun ... how very solemn and grieving this piece is. Though, (I'm sure you
know), writing it all out is so very cathartic. Chin up sweet friend. Life's
blessings are sometimes in disguise. We need only wait out the gloominess
to find the sun sparkle on our waters again. :)
the last line is tear-inducing. :( I do hope that is not how you feel. You bring
so much joy and smiles to those in your circle. (At least here anyway. ^_^)
hugs hugs hugs
~Breezy
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Re: ~Self-Destruction ~
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by wheels on
Thursday, 26th June 2008 @ 12:16:15 PM AEST
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An excellent poem. A definite description of building up a wall, hiding, and shutting down. Funny how "waiting for the other shoe to drop" makes it seem easier to shelter ourselves in a world that makes thing no better. Forces away our loved ones - did you know my ex-wife- huh?
Well written jenni |
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