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[Untitiled]
Contributed by
SammieMarie
on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 02:08:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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She comes home
Three 'o' clock
Hurry up
Tick-tock
And there he stands
He stares her down
Please, she prays,
Let him be found
He starts to shout
-Daddy please, what's wrong?
-What in the hell took you so long?
She tries to run
But he's too quick
He holds her close
'Till she feels sick
He pins her down
Strips off her clothes
She cries so hard
But no one knows
He pushes hard
She hurts again
He always has to win
He's finally done
He looks in her eyes
He slaps her as she starts to cry
"Don't even think to tell of this"
He whispers as he forced a kiss.
She grabs her clothes
To run and hide
All her life, her father lied.
In her closet
There she lay
But he has plans for her today.
"Get up, Move fast,"
He shouts at her
She doesn't dare say a word.
They drive away
He stops the car
Once they'd driven
Way too far
He pins her down
Once again
But this time at the very end
He throws her out
A scream heard from afar
She took her last breath
As daddy drove to the bar.
Copyright ©
SammieMarie
... [
2008-06-04 02:08:45]
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Re: [Untitiled]
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 02:19:39 AM AEST
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This just made me cry......... Then ending of it ripped my heart to pieces. You wrote on such a difficult subject.. I am sorry I cannot continue with the comment.
well done
Michelle |
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Re: [Untitiled]
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by Jazzyfizzle on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 08:35:02 AM AEST
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| such an amazing write, really i applaude you. its so touching and heart wrentching yet the imagery allows you to see it as you read. really i cant stress how highly i think of this write. |
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Re: [Untitiled]
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 08:50:27 AM AEST
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Sigh...heart breaking.... well written.. You might want to read my poem on the same subject called , "Mummy, Why?"
Thanks for sharing this...
Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net.....
Jenni |
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Re: [Untitiled]
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by SOCALGIRL on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 02:11:31 AM AEST
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| Brought tears to my eyes. |
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Re: [Untitiled]
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by SOCALGIRL on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 02:11:36 AM AEST
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| Brought tears to my eyes. |
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