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In Tears
Contributed by
Ambivalence
on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 01:36:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I entered this world in tears,
just like all newborns did,
having sprung forth, exposed
to the vices of those
who make life a living hell.
To the Prince! Our souls we sell.
I deal with this world in tears,
just like the depressed do,
all in tears of sadness
and none of happiness.
I can’t help but be ***** off
‘cause the world is full of crap.
I will leave this world in tears,
but with a smile on my face,
hoping to end up somewhere,
anywhere, far from this place.
Copyright ©
Ambivalence
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2008-06-04 01:36:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: In Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bubbles02 on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 06:22:00 AM AEST (User
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Such a sad write. But I liked it. And I'm sure people can relate to this. I know I can. Great job. |
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Re: In Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 12:12:04 PM AEST (User
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I like this a lot. It's very well thought out, rather than just a lot of whining, which this kind of sad poetry so often is. You actually had something to say, and took time to say it right.
I like that last stanza so much, if this poem were in a book, I might underline it.
Well done.
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Re: In Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by safetyinnumbers on
Tuesday, 17th June 2008 @ 06:32:26 PM AEST (User
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It's a sad reality we live in at times.....nature of this world....I thought you captured this well in this poem....Safetyinnumbers |
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