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~Puddle Jumping~
Contributed by
shelby
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Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 01:21:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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The down pour, round raindrops bouncing.
Wind howling skies black as coal.
Awake all night, with windows open listening to the drops,
little patters filling my ears, smell of freshness inviting.
Would you like to come with me outside?
Dance in the rain, run across the grass bare footed,
find the biggest puddle we can find and jump,
splashing water, dripping wet, soaked to the skin, sounds fun ?
We could hold hands and jump together.
Rain falling in currents right now,
mini rivers racing down the sides of the streets
plenty a puddle to jump in for two.
Copyright ©
shelby
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2008-06-04 01:21:32]
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Re: ~Puddle Jumping~
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by SammieMarie on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 03:23:02 AM AEST
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I really like this poem, because i always try to write poems about the rain, because i love it so much.
Needless to say my poems never work out.
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Re: ~Puddle Jumping~
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 06:43:23 AM AEST
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Taking my shoes off right now....I am there.
Great write Shelby.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~Puddle Jumping~
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 08:43:36 AM AEST
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A really fun write, Michelle... and since three is company..I'll just look on at you and Deadwriter from the side....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: ~Puddle Jumping~
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by holy on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 07:39:26 PM AEST
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| Beautiful language with wonderful story, very nice, I love it.. |
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Re: ~Puddle Jumping~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 09:56:01 PM AEST
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Oh pick me! Pick me!!!!
I LOVE jumping in puddles and just general shenanigans in the rain!
And now there is no one to get angry at me for getting wet! :P
This was fun sweets! I love it!
(Miss you too chicklet )
Hope your week is fairing well ^_^
HUGS
~Breezy
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Re: ~Puddle Jumping~
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by lost_again on
Thursday, 12th June 2008 @ 06:28:00 AM AEST
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You always make me smile girl. I am coming!
LA |
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