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Free
Contributed by
SeanAlexander
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Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 11:41:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Change,
you are free to do so,
you shape what you know,
have no one tell you,
what to do,
the path righteous and true,
you are fullfilled and
enlightened,
belt tightened,
and head held high,
to be yourself you do not try,
concreate beliefs you hold
to get by.
Copyright ©
SeanAlexander
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2008-06-03 11:41:23]
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Re: Free
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 05:00:44 PM AEST
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| So much said in so few lines. Great write.........Mike |
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Re: Free
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 4th June 2008 @ 10:09:49 PM AEST
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oooooooooo Existentialism!!! yes yes!! I found myself in disagreement with
our friend, Mr. Nietzsche and not for any kind of factual evidence, but just
the sheer power of my emotion that it can NOT exist!! lol be that as it may...
your expression here is well delivered .. but even your very words hold
a sadness that steers me clear of any thought that we are not all in
some kind of connection to each other and our world ...
I can't -passion forbids!
great post! Thought provoking to the end!!
~Breezy |
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