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The Last Words of May
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 04:18:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The sun will shine
when clouds run dry,
but I won't be here anymore,
not on the English clover fields,
nor down upon the moor,
as on The Cliffs of Dover, I'll,
lay lost, like those who died before.
The dawn will break,
and tears shall fly,
and wind shall swiftly take them all,
into the sea where waves collide,
hard against the white cliff wall.
Then looking back upon the sky,
I'll close my eyes and say goodbye
To England, and to all.
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lostinmyself
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2008-06-03 04:18:52] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Last Words of May
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 04:39:36 AM AEST (User
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OH hun this is so pretty yet so sad.
It is always a pleasure to read your work.
I hope you are ok??
Michelle |
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Re: The Last Words of May
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 05:16:41 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful lil sis...can I come with you?
I can't get over the beauty of the lines....sigh...I love this one!! |
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Re: The Last Words of May
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 05:28:05 AM AEST (User
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The first thing that came into my head when I read this was "WOW". Still just shaking my head. Incredible......Mike |
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Re: The Last Words of May
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 08:52:14 AM AEST (User
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Fantastic write....Extremely beautiful..
Jenni |
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Re: The Last Words of May
(User Rating: 1 ) by dummie on
Tuesday, 3rd June 2008 @ 10:18:02 AM AEST (User
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one of the best poems i've read in recent weeks. thank you. thank you. wow. |
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Re: The Last Words of May
(User Rating: 1 ) by Loende on
Friday, 4th July 2008 @ 10:03:02 PM AEST (User
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Ah, my Kindred Sister. You break my heart and still it sings to me. This is beauty in simplicity and I love you for it.
Be well,
Loende |
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Re: The Last Words of May
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th August 2008 @ 11:04:08 AM AEST (User
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That's sad....yet pretty. I like it. :-)
Timmy
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Re: The Last Words of May
(User Rating: 1 ) by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 7th August 2008 @ 04:12:39 PM AEST (User
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For me this is very visually serene.
Emotionally, it seems choppy like cold waves against sharp cliffs. |
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Re: The Last Words of May
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st September 2008 @ 01:05:06 AM AEST (User
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Oh sweets!! WHAT a WRITE!
I adore this. It is so mysterious and deliciously poetic. The first time
I read this I was affected in a melancholic way, but upon this morning's
read I have found something different. A talent for the craft that you
have honed to near perfection, hun! Damn. This is exceptional! I
enjoy all of your work-- always have, but this one somehow is
different for me. It speaks to me of something else. Something more.
Something MUCH more, though I cannot even place my finger upon
what more.
Exceptional job, sweets. It's nice to know that "actual" poetry still
lives and breathes in the pages of YPDC.
Love ya!! Will PM you even though I know you won't be back for a while. :(
Miss you sweetie ...
~ Breezy
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Re: The Last Words of May
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th September 2008 @ 08:54:31 AM AEST (User
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phil this is magnificently beautiful! wow and wow!
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Last Words of May
(User Rating: 1 ) by wizard on
Sunday, 28th September 2008 @ 09:28:02 AM AEST (User
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beautifully done,
wiz |
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