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Come Home With Me

Contributed by jyssvw22 on Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 11:36:07 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

strangers no longer separated by secretes
now share a bond among all those who can feel this
the love that comes, leaves with only what it brought
all happening in an unlikely frozen moment
or so we thought

lovers woven from different cloths
conflict engulf all those issues thought up and lost
driven to points of madding circular costs
expenses incurred
the most significant of which, are those that tend to burn

enemies sworn to their counterpart’s destruction
a strict adherence to a diplomatic engagement of provocation
where it fails to make sense to those on the outside witnessing
all the personal insight spouted on those pretending to be listening and wishing

to reason with stubbornness is to tip the balance of counter intuitiveness
for if favor prevails with wishful outcomes
where circumstances have prevented the obvious
the occurrences,
they took on a life of their own
in succession they compiled
it was reconciled
and they, and I, alike, are left alone

fruits of the garden are already in mid-bloom
it may be soon, that all is remembered, in joyous ruins

a shadow of the former earth is reflected in the pious moon
where heaven and hell are exhumed
and hatred in consumed
love spreads
the bed
awaits
let us partake

_______
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Copyright Â© jyssvw22 ... [ 2008-06-01 23:36:07]
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Re: Come Home With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 12:54:26 PM AEST
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Whooooo hoooooo this had me on a roller coaster, in a good way of course. There is so much to this write I love, word usage, style, detail,

if favor prevails with wishful outcomes, just one of many parts I like.

Michelle

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