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love all around, like a chinese fire drill
Contributed by
xxILoveTheSilencexx
on
Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 02:34:10 PM in AEST
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anguished
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It's like a Chinese fire drill.....
Take what you want and leave the rest.......
And then when it's all over....
you wish you hadn't said or done the things you did.....
And you're lying there.....
Confused and not able to sleep.....
Wishing to God that things were different.....
And the confusion....
is spreading through you like a shadow....
covering every surface it can find.....
Nothing feels right....
or the same...
Nothing feels secure....
or sound.....
And then you feel it.....
it hits you like a rock....
You feel the love all around....
surrounding you safe and sound......
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xxILoveTheSilencexx
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2008-06-01 14:34:10]
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Re: love all around, like a chinese fire drill
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by spaceotter on
Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 11:48:50 PM AEST
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Re: love all around, like a chinese fire drill
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by deadwriter on
Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 11:08:14 AM AEST
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Very good piece. I like it.
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