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The Room
Contributed by
UnknownLegend
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Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 01:24:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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There was a room where time stood still, now that time does fly
one takes wing at morning light ..... and sighs a tearful sigh
I thought that you would be the one of all the ones before
inside I knew the feelings grew, too strong now to ignore
one must go to search the clouds for things yet still brand new
the other still in search of things..... of what, he has no clue
this room where love and passion lived, where once they did reside
to soon the wonder there within, the love and passion dies
if you'd have stayed a little while, for just a week or two
you would have learned what you and I, really never knew
from where I stood I heard the tears as you walked 'cross the floor
my face away it dare not stray, 'til you walk thru the door
If I'd have thought that you'd look back I'd never turned around
the eyes to meet for one last time, spoke soft without a sound
yours to me so low and sweet ...... "please don't let me go"
and mine to you.... "please walk away. " Why ?... I'll never know
one slowly walks on out the door and leaves there much too soon
the other follows as trails do ...... it's now an empty room
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Re: The Room
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 05:22:15 AM AEST
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Fantastic write, an answer poem: Sue
This room I have seen and felt the hurt, the consequence thats true.
For loneliness it followed , nothing less , for me or you
Within this room , my heart did bleed, my feelings left akimbo
My tearful eyes are testament, to the love now lost in limbo
Emptiness is all I see, contentment lies bleeding on that floor
And if I could make a wish come true, I would see an open door
Depression seeps through every pore, regrets they swallow me
Life is but a two edged sword, and now I truly see |
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Re: The Room
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by shelby on
Monday, 2nd June 2008 @ 10:39:39 AM AEST
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David,
I do not even know what to say here.
Yes that room, I do recall standing there...... sighh
Beautiful in its sadness, thanks for the read.
It leaves a person really thinking.
Breath taking.
Hugssss
Michelle
ps thanks for the note! It was taken to heart... appreciate it too my sweet sweet friend.
blows kisses and tosses daisies |
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