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My love
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 04:37:10 AM in AEST
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my love
she can go bathe in a pool of blood
She sent me through a spiral of despair
all because she didn't care
She never loved me
all she wanted was more money
She didn't love me for me
So she broke it off
I loved her
she was the one i could call mine
but why did i have to be so blind
I was crazy for her she just blew my mind
but when she saw someone better
she wrote in a letter
We're threw
I don't love you
But he will see
how evil she can be
because just like it was with me
all she wants is her man's money
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Re: My love
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by shelby on
Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 04:52:20 AM AEST
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Touching write, though it hurts isn't it better to know this about her now rather than later. I get perplexed with our society today it is a material world. We are born naked with nothing and leave this world the same way. It is very sad that people spend their time with only money as their life mission for love lasts through eternity. I hope someone comes along who is full of truth and love, that is what we deserve in this old world.
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Re: My love
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by Drunken_Koala on
Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 03:56:51 PM AEST
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| At least you know what she's like now & you can feel comforted that she is out of your life & you can move on. Materialistic people learn all too late that life isn't just about money...Nice write:) |
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