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A Journey Without You
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 02:44:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Do not want to feel hurt anymore
Feeling down and out
Torn and shattered
It just hurt so much to be feeling this way
You’re the reason why I am smiling
And you are also the reason for my tears
The feelings I had for you
Will always be there
No matter how hard I try to forget
You and I are never meant to be
Painful and hurtful as it is
I continue my journey without you
Copyright ©
funnyface09
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2008-06-01 02:44:30]
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Re: A Journey Without You
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by shelby on
Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 04:44:42 AM AEST
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Oh sweety, I am so sorry that your heart is broken.
What can I do to make a smile come across your face?
Your poetry always evokes such feeling and sweet surrender.
Michelle |
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Re: A Journey Without You
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 08:44:31 AM AEST
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| Moving on without the one you have given your heart to makes you feel as if you're leaving your heart behind. So sad, but nice write. |
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Re: A Journey Without You
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 1st June 2008 @ 01:31:31 PM AEST
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It's funny how the one person who can heal the hurt you feel is the one who often hurts you.... Great write..
Jenni |
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