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Feelings ( Love A Harsh Touch)

Contributed by liamleash on Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 05:24:30 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract



Stand behind me , hold your arms out.
Watch me as I fall apart.
Watch me tear strip by strip.
Faster and harder I’ll fall into this pit.
Vicious stares and careless whispers.
Your movement says it all.
Follow me with your lips.
We'll speak in dance and laugh in sorrow.

I tried to fight the feeling, but the feeling threw me down.
I tried to shout but the feeling silenced me.
I tried to get back up but the feeling made me weak at the knees.

Flawless execution of a two step plan.
Razor sharp words cut through this paper thin heart.
This is for the man who doesn’t believe in love in first sight.
Just remember it takes a second to blink and she'll be gone.
For the girls who believe he's your first love.
Just think your another notch and he's gone.

Trying to find you in the mist of all the smoke.
Lost my self along the way.
Kissing and tell , but watch as the kiss makes you mute.
Hitting you harder than any punch could ever touch.
This gap in the road makes for tiresome work.
Falling into this canyon, this black hole heart, falling harder then the beat of your chest.

I tried to fight the feeling, but the feeling threw me down.
I tried to write but the feeling wouldn’t let me.
I tried to look but the feeling wouldn’t let me see.
I tried to move away from you but the feeling wouldn’t let me be.

A harsh reality of love or a critic scared to feel something so strong.
Something life changing.
Something so common it hurts, it infects , it holds you.






Copyright © liamleash ... [ 2008-05-31 05:24:30]
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Re: Feelings ( Love A Harsh Touch) (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy on Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 05:57:20 AM AEST
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this is a fantastic write...it is so full of emotion I think you captured it beautifully...this is a great write well done!!

Puppy :)


Re: Feelings ( Love A Harsh Touch) (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 09:08:27 AM AEST
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Well for 17 you wrote a hard hitting write. Keep up the good work. As far as loser boys you don't need them hun. There is a lot of living to do without the misery they bring. Stay strong in your convictions.

Michelle




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