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Robbery
Contributed by
nirvana12
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Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 02:08:12 AM in AEST
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StoryPoetry
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I see you walk out the front door and leave it unlocked. Im headed inside once your cars done the block.
Middle-class neighborhood, no one should be home. Your husbands at work and you are now gone.
As Im raiding your jewlery box I hear footsteps coming down the hallway. I pull out my gun as you son walks in, pull the trigger and blast him away.
I look at the body to see who it is. Man, I just shot a high-school friend.
I stare at his body with a hole in the head. Im too stunned to move, that should be me instead.
I hear sirens moving down the street. Its more than one car, theyre moving in fleets.
I grab some money and make my way to the door. Run the opposite way and start thinking "what for?"
Now, I got away but I left fingerprints, Im thinking "Im screwed" as I hop the next fence.
Made it to my friends and saw my face on the news. A life on the run is a life Im ready to lose.
I walked out back and pulled out my gun. Stuck it in my mouth, now this story is done.
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Re: Robbery
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by shelby on
Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 04:33:43 AM AEST
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Yikes, this is well written but the content kind of scared me a bit. I hope you are writing in a fictional sense here.
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Re: Robbery
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by ratty on
Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 07:52:01 AM AEST
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| Like it!!! nice written!!! |
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