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The Ominous Thunder
Contributed by
the_callif
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Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 06:39:28 PM in AEST
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Ominous thunder rumbles,
Distant, powerful.
Why must it be so dramatic?
It acts as though something important will happen,
As though we surmount to anything,
It predicts our climax quite confidently,
Grumbling that we indeed mean something,
But all I hear when it speaks is:
"The rain will come and something special follows,
you get wet."
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the_callif
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2008-05-30 18:39:28]
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Re: The Ominous Thunder
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by ingeniusidiot on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 09:38:27 PM AEST
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Welcome back...
I like this. You did a good job with it. Makes me remember watching the lightning storms when I used to live in Texas...
I liked your ending added a humorous twist to the piece.
Good job once again.
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Re: The Ominous Thunder
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by shelby on
Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 04:16:29 AM AEST
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It has been a long while since you were here.. Welcome back.
I loved the images in this, thunder storms are awesome. Vivid detail here you took me to a storm.
We actually had a kickin thunder storm here which is rare in the Pacific Northwest it filled me with energy.
I loved the very ending that is profound.
I hope you are going to stick around forawhile.
Hugss
Michelle
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