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There's Nothing Left
Contributed by
pixie
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Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 12:19:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I don’t know what to do, there’s nothing left,
I have lived right up ‘til my last breath,
Willing myself, begging, pleading,
And now my battered body’s bleeding.
The emotional scars, too much to bear,
The pain and anguish continue to tear,
They scrape at the bones of me,
I live in prison, never free.
I long for sweet happiness,
But into your world I do digress,
Choking from your deadly fumes,
Your misery violates my womb.
Hacking away, just chopping..chopping,
Never for a moment stopping,
Bleeding my veins ever dry,
There’s nothing left, but still I cry.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2008-05-30 12:19:35]
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Re: There's Nothing Left
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by shelby on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 12:52:15 PM AEST
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Pixie,
I know you are going through such a hard time right now. It may even seem there is no way out, no light at the end of that dark tunnel but I know you...... You are beautiful and your inner light is there just reach for it, you may need to reach and grab it so hard you will stand yourself on your head but do it!! This makes me feel so sad reading it. I so do not like my friends to be so hurt. I felt you and I hear you and I do understand.
If I could wash it all away from you I would.
Please please hang in there it will turn around, for I am not speaking to someone weak...... You have fire and strength dig it out and run like the wind with it hun!!!!!!!!!!
I love ya remember that ok??
Michelle |
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Re: There's Nothing Left
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by ratty on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 12:55:51 PM AEST
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| I keep it short....Great write! |
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Re: There's Nothing Left
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 01:01:53 PM AEST
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Very sad but great writing as always.
My heart goes out to you.
luv, huggs, prayers, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy |
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Re: There's Nothing Left
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 02:26:57 PM AEST
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Hi Pixie, Shelby said it all... Great write....
I'll try to be on gmail tomorrow night...perhaps we could talk...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: There's Nothing Left
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 02:21:57 AM AEST
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A very stirring piece. The pain is tangable.
I so enjoy reading your works...I so wish that they came from another source... |
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Re: There's Nothing Left
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by pander on
Monday, 25th August 2008 @ 11:04:34 AM AEST
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Hi Pixie,
I'm so sorry that I have been away from here for so long. My great regret in life is loosing touch with you. But I'm hoping to put that right and I just want you to know I'm always here for you. Please get in touch soon.
Your old friend,
Pander
xxxxx
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Re: There's Nothing Left
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by quadira on
Friday, 9th July 2010 @ 10:32:40 AM AEST
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Enjoyed the poem but made me feel sad too. A good poem always affects me emotionally.
thanks
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