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A Green World
Contributed by
Saaaraxxx16
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Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 06:57:15 AM in AEST
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So what if i fall down
and i never try to get up
whats the point
when youve just had enough
if the worlds not what it seems
what if you looked at the trees
and all you could see
was a grassy gleam
the point im trying to make
if it makes any sense
why do those of us debate
whether this life is worth living
sure this life is green
my favorite color
but what does it mean
i guess lifes just not for me
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2008-05-30 06:57:15]
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Re: A Green World
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by catz77 on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 10:20:34 AM AEST
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Life is heavenly when you want it to be.
I like this write, but if i may make a suggestion and I mean no offense by it but I think this could sound a little better without the favorite color line, but than again that's just me ^_^
I wrote a similar poem, check it out if you want, but you don't have to...
anyway Good write and keep it up :D
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Re: A Green World
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 10:31:24 AM AEST
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| i think the green line is good in there it's the small things that keep us going most of the time and that is one of the small things hold on to it |
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