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Cry For Help
Contributed by
6whiteRoses
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Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 12:04:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Oh what can I do
God I need your help soon
I come running to you
Please erase all my gloom
Here's another scar
From the burdens I bear
I know your not far
But please show you care
Copyright ©
6whiteRoses
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2008-05-30 00:04:44]
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Re: Cry For Help
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 06:19:55 AM AEST
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| good job on the rhyme sceme |
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Re: Cry For Help
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 11:14:34 AM AEST
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Great write. Contact me if you need an ear.
Deadwriter
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Re: Cry For Help
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 11:45:24 AM AEST
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| Just gotta love when someone can put so much emotion in so few words as you have done here. Great Write!...........Mike |
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Re: Cry For Help
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by shelby on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 01:19:23 PM AEST
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Without the bitter we cannot know the sweet. Keep rolling with the punches that is what I tell myself.
Great expression with few words.
Hugs and feel happy soon
Michelle |
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Re: Cry For Help
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by dougnut on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 09:10:07 PM AEST
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Short and to the point
God Will Help You.
Praying for you.
God Bless You,
Doug.:-) |
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