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I Am Lost
Contributed by
ramfire
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Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 12:01:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I love you and know it may end me soon.
You are no good like some noxious slow drug,
killing resolution by your mind swoon.
I can’t seem to leave your poison’s great tug.
I love you and know end fain brings me death.
You tempt reason by seductive fine words,
each dart piercing my lungs sweet breath.
My emotion’s like stampeding wild herds.
I love you but know our lives do nay mesh.
You touch me and my resolve ends most fast,
a touch sending quivers that rake my flesh,
hoping yea forever night’s thrill might last.
I am a lost soul addict that needs more,
knowing my end cometh by well shaped whore.
Copyright ©
ramfire
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2008-05-30 00:01:35]
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Re: I Am Lost
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by shelby on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 04:25:12 AM AEST
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Oh my friend I haven't read anything like this from you before. It seems as though you are at a tug of war with heart and soul. A painful poem but none the less written wonderfully. I hope the inner turmoil finds its way to peaceful resolve.
Hugs
Michelle
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Re: I Am Lost
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 11:18:30 AM AEST
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A most powerful piece of work. I do hope the end does not come to you.
Deadwriter
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Re: I Am Lost
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by emystar on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 01:30:18 PM AEST
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So thaty's where you've been. I'm jus glad to see anything frome you.
It's very sad but well written.
Please, don't stay away so long.
huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
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