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Contributed by
rhei76
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Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 05:57:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Death to god and my mortal soul
I say this loud
cause if I thought it, God would know
I believe in him, cuz I said so
I believe in evil too
I believe most of you are
And I don't care
cuz there's no heaven
and there's no hell
when you're gone
you are gone
Not in black
Just a connection
Front to the back
Death to Society and my physical being
I hate this place
Cuz I learned you
Hate me
Cuz I seem free
But dumb ***
I'm just trying to see
further than you
Want to look
What?
Was I a priest, a petifile
A king, a murderer
Was I a couch or teacher
That took advantage of the situation
What?
Was I?
A dying vessal from the first breath
Why yes,
light and dark on every form
You make what you do
I tell you this I know I'm not the one
EVIL
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rhei76
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2008-05-28 17:57:16]
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Re: live
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 06:11:20 PM AEST
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Black is the port that home this ship.
Death to the one who wrote this ****.
Gallows have been formed on each and every shore, to deliever the score that was earned this dawn.
-live boy, for the last minute before sunrise. Til your death momentarily arrives. live, it will be over before you realize.- |
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Re: live
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by Muinanyere on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 03:12:45 AM AEST
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| I'm not sure if you want comments on this but I really liked it, your writing style is very unique. Keep up the god work |
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Re: live
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 5th June 2008 @ 05:04:57 AM AEST
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| I definitely agree with what you said. Great poem!! |
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