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untitled, unsung
Contributed by
rhei76
on
Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 04:18:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I don't know what it means
or if it means anything at all
I don't have a page
And I don't have a song
I try to hum
but I just fall
I ask why
but you can't hear my thoughts
You look at me
And see my smirk
You call me dirty
And I wonder where it could go
Then I let it go
Turn, and wonder if you really know
All my words are second hand
it's all been said before
I wish you would understand
I'm wierd, cuz each day I want you more
You look at me
And see my smirk
You call me a dirty little whore
And I wonder where we can go
Then I let it go
Turn and wonder if you really know
I'm a fake
My lines
They shade many eyes
And I ask
Do they tell you my
secret
I'm all alone
needing a soul
could it be you?
could it be you?
Then I let it go
Turn, cuz I'm scared you know
I'm really no one
I just stare at the stars
And try to hum
A song from life times learned
"All my friends are dead and gone
Left me here with this song
Nothing else to ******* do
But wait just for you"
*****I*SPACE*****
All my words are second hand
It's all been said before
I just wish
I could tell you more
**************
You look at me
And you see my smirk
You call me dirty
And I wonder if you will stay
Long enough
For me to show you
I am real
You look at me
And see my smirk
You call me dirty
And I wonder if you feel
Why I'm trying to be steel ..................
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rhei76
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2008-05-28 16:18:51]
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Re: untitled, unsung
(User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 03:16:16 AM AEST
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| This was wonderful , it's sad no on commented on it. Well I am first then!! I love your style :) |
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Re: untitled, unsung
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by emystar on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 09:34:29 AM AEST
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This write is creation at it's best.
It jus reaches out and grabs you in the very first word. Awesome, friend.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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