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Hopes and dreams and paper
Contributed by
KatsMeow
on
Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 11:24:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Hopes and dreams and paper
And pictures filled with smiles.
Traveling through a lifetime,
More memories than miles.
Poignant feelings waking,
As old tokens are unwrapped.
Remembering hearts breaking,
As maidens too often are apt.
Jewels from distant relatives,
And animals made of glass.
Letters from admirers,
Things that quickly past.
Events that ended quickly,
Though memories remain.
Especially if they involved
Heartache, loss and pain.
The closing of the boxes,
The shutting of the doors.
The memories still linger,
Like soft steps across the floor.
Copyright ©
KatsMeow
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2008-05-28 11:24:00]
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Re: Hopes and dreams and paper
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 11:27:38 AM AEST
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Very vivid and poignant write Kat.
I could see the images in my head as I read the words, they just tumble effortlessly down the page.
Well done
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Re: Hopes and dreams and paper
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by tifrob on
Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 04:27:36 PM AEST
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I thought this was a wonder poem. It says it all. Good luck moving.
~Me~ |
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Re: Hopes and dreams and paper
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by deadwriter on
Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 10:00:42 PM AEST
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This is a great piece. It is amazing how each piece packed away relates to a memory. Good job.
Deadwriter
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