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When Angels Cry
Contributed by
OneLastTime
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Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 02:47:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I think I'm loosing it,
Incapable of stopping myself,
I walk towards the cliff.
I hear a voice,
Whispering,
I keep walking.
The whispers turn into shouts,
I ignore them.
I see an angel,
I stop.
He cries.
With his tears falling
I feel the pain and remorse leaving my body.
Salvation is here.
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2008-05-28 02:47:01]
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Re: When Angels Cry
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 07:11:17 AM AEST
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Beautifully sad. This was well done. So emotional yet beautiful. Well written.
Take care
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Re: When Angels Cry
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 09:30:40 AM AEST
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this is short but extremely sad.. i like the flow of it .. well done
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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