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I only love you when
Contributed by
safetyinnumbers
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Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 09:13:15 PM in AEST
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I only love you when you’re bleeding
and it’s cold and grey outside
I only love you when you’re crying
and the wind screams and sighs
I only love you when you’re sleeping
and the rain falls and bites
I only love you when you’re dreaming
and the ground opens wide
I only love you when you’re falling
into the darkness of the night.
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2008-05-27 21:13:15]
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Re: I only love you when
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 09:51:44 PM AEST
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Very good piece.
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Re: I only love you when
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 10:57:33 PM AEST
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Another great write...I kinda feel this way towards myself right now...But that is due to past event coming back to continually haunt me....but as I said you did a very good job writing this
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Re: I only love you when
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by ratty on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 12:50:02 PM AEST
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| I "felt" this one........and I must say that I dont "feel" other poems very often.......Nice write.....Greetings....... |
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