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The Full Moon
Contributed by
maggot
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Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 02:08:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Full Moon tonight
The stars are shiniing bright
Theres something in the shadows giving you a fright
Its such such a gruesome sight
Seeingn children of the night Destroying humans one by one
With no compassion for life
Copyright ©
maggot
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2008-05-27 14:08:28]
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Re: The Full Moon
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by ingeniusidiot on
Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 08:52:07 PM AEST
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Short sweet and to the point.
The last two lines can actually describe the world that we live in...good job..
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Re: The Full Moon
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 07:02:00 AM AEST
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Fast paced and hard hitting. Well written.
It was straight forward and very truthful..It makes you stop and think, this poems has very many meanings...
Well done
Take care
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Re: The Full Moon
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by TundraHydra on
Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 09:07:08 AM AEST
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| short and insightful good write |
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