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Just another midnight poem
Contributed by
HonestInk
on
Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 01:52:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I bottle up what I'm thinkin
I know the time I'm wastin
And it doesn't feel important
no, not today
You lock up what you're feelin
My heart you know you're stealin
And its like you don't care
yeah, just give it away
And it looks like I lost again
sold my heart to another "friend"
I wont let you see me fall
no, not again
So up go the walls now
We're both in the dark now
sayin what we know is a lie
Goodbye
Copyright ©
HonestInk
... [
2008-05-27 13:52:27]
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Re: Just another midnight poem
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 04:57:21 PM AEST
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| so true for so many situations. nice write. |
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Re: Just another midnight poem
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by KatsMeow on
Wednesday, 28th May 2008 @ 11:30:41 AM AEST
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| Nice job, and fitting for many online friendships! |
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Re: Just another midnight poem
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by freckle on
Friday, 15th May 2009 @ 03:24:48 PM AEST
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I enjoyed your poem. It was simple, melodic and true on so very many levels. I have given up trying to figure out relationships!
Thanks for sharing!
Carol |
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