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The sea
Contributed by
SilverRain
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Monday, 26th May 2008 @ 03:44:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
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She intrigues me
especially when she is like she is today
wild and uncontrollable
independent and strong
mind of her own
My eyes flow over her in admiration
I stand in awe as she approach me
feeling her swell growing uncontrollably,
hearing her sigh as she comes down again
In that moment
I see a glimpse of her vulnerability
that she always tries to hide
As I approach once again
she pulls back into herself
fearing what I might have seen
then she gently reach out
touches at my hand
reminds me of where we have been
As the sun fades away
beautiful shadows on her face
my heart will stay with her here
I leave my footprint in her heart
until I meet her again
Copyright ©
SilverRain
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2008-05-26 03:44:38]
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Re: The sea
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by Muinanyere on
Monday, 26th May 2008 @ 08:03:47 AM AEST
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| This is so beautiful, I loved it! Good write :) |
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Re: The sea
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 26th May 2008 @ 10:41:15 AM AEST
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This is beautifully written. The sea intriques me also. I wrote a poem recently about the sea but it's no where near as beautiful as this....Great write
Jenni |
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Re: The sea
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by jessb3 on
Monday, 26th May 2008 @ 11:39:07 AM AEST
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| An absolutely beautiful poem!! :o) |
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Re: The sea
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by shelby on
Monday, 26th May 2008 @ 12:26:34 PM AEST
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Bravo! I fell in love with the first verse and kept right on going. Your vivid descriptions made me take a walk right there. I am awaiting my moments spending times with the ocean soon. It lulls me into its depths.
Lovely work
Michelle
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Re: The sea
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by ratty on
Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 04:22:20 AM AEST
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| beautiful written. Mostly I read more the darker poems but I realy enjoyed this one....... |
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Re: The sea
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 25th June 2008 @ 01:38:23 AM AEST
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What I find amazing in this piece is the feeling of the waves, the moving forward, drawing back and again.
Very well done. I can honestly say no other poem has given me that sense of movement. |
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