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A precious necklace
Contributed by
holy
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Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 02:25:45 AM in AEST
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A precious necklace
"Shall we go to the movie?"
"All right, with pleasure!"
The evening of the next day,
we went to the movie,
we had a wonderful time together.
I can remember it well,
even every trivial incident in great detail.
On the way to movie,
you took a necklace out of your pocket,
"I brought back the necklace for my sister,
my sister told me the colour suited your complexion,
if you like it......"
"How beautiful!
I love it."
I was straight with you.
"That is great,
really great!
If you really like it,
I will just give it to you."
I could see that you were very pleased about my words.
You placed the necklace round my neck carefully,
and looked at me with an incredulous expression,
"I promise on my honor not to tell lies.
I thought I would give it to you yesterday,
but I was afraid you won't like it,
you know,
it is a cheaper version of the one I saw in a pearl shop."
"It doesn't matter,
never mind,
I really like it so much."
I tried to console you,
"Do you know what I mean?
there is nothing more important than the love between us,
you always take me in your heart,
I always care for you so much,
it is enough richness for us to enjoy all our future time."
"When I am rich enough,
I will buy you a real necklace."
You said again.
I understood how you felt,
you were pleasant,
"Haha, ok, ok,
let me check your lung and heart?"
I was very happy after you returned,
taking the necklace with me,
I never felt tired.
Copyright ©
holy
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2008-05-25 02:25:45]
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Re: A precious necklace
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by screwge on
Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 02:37:06 AM AEST
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| This has a very neat format. I really like the colloquial, casual vibe in this poem. |
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Re: A precious necklace
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 04:30:08 AM AEST
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Holy, this poem was as precious as the necklace. Well written..
Hugs
Jenni |
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