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Remember me
Contributed by
MissTeenSuicide
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Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 05:23:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Isn’t it sad how memories fade
How we forget and move on to the next day
Isn’t it tragic how we lose the ones we love
Forgotten, their souls reflected in the whitest dove
The frame of something stands creaking still
The good it did must be remembered, but never will
Isn’t it awful how we can’t take back time
How I couldn’t save him, how I could never make you mine
But remember how it once was
How idyllic it used to be
And I think and wonder where you are
And if you too, are thinking of me
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Re: Remember me
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by emystar on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 05:57:35 PM AEST
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Really good writing.
Awesome.
huggs,
emy
i can certianly relate. |
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Re: Remember me
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by SilverRain on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 07:37:46 PM AEST
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| How easy it is to move on and just forget the people that shared so much with you when you needed it most. You made me think of them again. Thanks for that! Well written. |
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Re: Remember me
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 04:10:51 AM AEST
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| the words you write echo my deepest thoughts. |
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Re: Remember me
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by MissTeenSuicide on
Tuesday, 12th October 2010 @ 01:11:46 AM AEST
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For any of those interested!
I'm using parts of this poem in one of my new songs.
It'll only be up in a couple of months seeing as I'm in a band now, but keep an eye open!
www.myspace.com/cyanidesunza |
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