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My World No.2
Contributed by
Roddy
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Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 04:56:58 PM in AEST
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In the world I see you stumble along in a white expanse. Your private purgatory deafens out all sounds. You cannot die yet, you cannot live; for life without death is no life at all. Your but a speck in this indefineable maddness. You stalk around from day to night; never seeing the dawns passion and light, or dusks gleaming beauty and fading luminous skys. You roam around alone not afraid for this is the life you've always known.
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Re: My World No.2
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by shelby on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 05:11:18 PM AEST
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This holds many truths to it in many many ways.
Or dusks gleaming beauty and fading luminous skys that is so pretty!
Incredible job as always.
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Re: My World No.2
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by SilverRain on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 07:57:12 PM AEST
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| Can totally relate to your words. Very well done! Great post. |
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