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with out you
Contributed by
meddowrose
on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 03:30:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I can't live without you. I would breathe the air, and my heart would beat,
but I would not feel the joy of life.
My dreams would be lost like a leaf carted away by a storm.
I would gaze at the stars without appreciating the
way they light up the sky.
I would pass the roses in bloom without noticing their beauty.
I would no longer look forward to each sunset and each dawn.
I would be broken, never to be mended again.
Winter would own my heart;
its icy breath would steal the warmth in my soul, because I could not smile without your love.
I could not know laughter or happiness.If you were lost to me,
I'd have no reason to try, no reason to be.
You are my prayer, my shelter from hopelessness and despair,
my sunshine, my light, my lazy days,
and my peaceful nights,
you only you can keep the spark in my soul burning bright
thanks to you i can look at my son and smile
thanks to you i can love the world around me
thanks to you i can wake every moring with smile on my face
and sleep every night with no hurt in my heart
with out you i would be nothing
i love you and my amazing little boy this is for you
Copyright ©
meddowrose
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2008-05-24 15:30:43]
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Re: with out you
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by shelby on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 03:54:05 PM AEST
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First of all I want to say I love your screen name.
Secondly this poem is full of all that is good and you are so blessed to know this love. I know it as well and what would it be without it? Incredible write.
Michelle |
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Re: with out you
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by Roddy on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 04:18:30 PM AEST
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Can we say Hallmark? lol
Seriously you should sell that to Hallmark that was deeply emtional, and sweet |
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Re: with out you
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 04:31:08 AM AEST
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| i thought it started out very weak, but damn you put some oomph into this. i cant even spell it, but you know what i am talking about. this poem, emotional power. you got me straight charged. |
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