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Believe in Christ
Contributed by
Zork
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Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 10:31:31 AM in AEST
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My Mama said,
"Believe in Christ".
I told her,
"Believe in me".
So I shipped off to Israel the next day
Anyway,
I must admit,
I looked out of place,
Being a white boy with a pale face.
But soon enough I made some friends,
Picked up a couple of fishermen,
They were bored so they followed my every step.
You could say I was quite the celebrity,
Loved by many,
And some even feared me,
The latter put me on a stick,
It turned out fine,
I bounced back quick.
And after all that,
With the beat in my chest,
I caught the first boat back west,
Mama asked,
"Do you believe now son?"
I said,
"Mama, you should see what your boy's gone and done".
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Zork
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2008-05-24 10:31:31]
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Re: Believe in Christ
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by Voice of the Silent on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 01:02:13 PM AEST
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| Roflmao I get it funny but most people will look down on this kind of humor but i am open minded and find it funny and a good write |
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Re: Believe in Christ
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by safetyinnumbers on
Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 10:11:54 AM AEST
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I think even Jesus would find the humour in this poem....nice work....
....Jesus ice cream on a stick
eat him cold
eat him quick....
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Re: Believe in Christ
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by ratty on
Tuesday, 27th May 2008 @ 08:46:15 AM AEST
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| funny written....... |
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Re: Believe in Christ
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 2nd November 2009 @ 12:35:50 PM AEST
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pretty good for a religious humurous poem, i kind of see some irony in here
take care
-K.Z. |
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