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Wave Less Ocean Lonely Heart
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
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Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 01:12:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Upon a wave less ocean lonely hearts do sail
Looking to the stars for their guidance
While the canvas hangs empty, waiting for a sudden gale
Behind the helm of life the wayward heart take an unfaltering stance
A view across the horizon troubles the mind and makes a heart weep
Like an ode to his lover’s memory but one of a tormenting phantom
For in the deep blue of the ocean her eyes it does keep
Awaiting upon the gale that will fill the sail like a cool breeze in autumn
With clear sailing under a bright blue sky waiting for the rain
This empty vessel through soulless eyes ever does it stare
As the tears that stream along a weathered face do stain
And to the far corners of the compass trying to toss away every care
As far as the angels tucked away below deck
Paying heed their slumber not to stir
For there is nothing around but endless ocean not even a tiny speck
Of anything resembling land or anything that can remind him of her
The stars and the clear midnight give no comfort
As the still waters mirror the night sky
Just as the eyes mirror the world around them but tend to distort
Yet nothing speaks, not a breeze nor a sigh
While angels wake and take flight upon their mother’s wing
From the stillness a gale arises with a visit from St. Elmo’s Fire
Wanting to see Heaven so he can once more hear his angel sing
An end to his nightmare has become his heart’s only desire
Christina and Rich
2008
Copyright ©
ingeniusidiot
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2008-05-24 01:12:59]
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Re: Wave Less Ocean Lonely Heart
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 07:08:14 AM AEST
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Lovely, romantic, sad and hopeful.
This creates such a picture and I think it is a wonderfully written poem. It is a wonder what one can do with words.
Take care
Christina |
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Re: Wave Less Ocean Lonely Heart
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 05:01:32 AM AEST
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Very powerful piece of writing. You both deserve a round of appluase for this.
Deadwriter
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Re: Wave Less Ocean Lonely Heart
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by maggot on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 02:26:52 PM AEST
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lovely poem
sad romantic and full of emotion.
a powerful and good write
keep up the good work |
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Re: Wave Less Ocean Lonely Heart
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by safetyinnumbers on
Thursday, 29th May 2008 @ 08:30:13 PM AEST
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I like the imagery and feeling in this poem.....the emptiness and desire on an open sea....Nice write.... |
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Re: Wave Less Ocean Lonely Heart
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by The_Callif on
Saturday, 31st May 2008 @ 05:06:16 AM AEST
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Excellent write you two!
Hoping to see more of your work-
Callif |
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