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nicola
Contributed by
zelator
on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 04:14:47 PM in AEST
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Sun faced
you came to me
peachy soft
and round
complete with fuzz;
you squeaked and gurgled
full of juicy sweetness
perfect for me with sugar tooth.
sometimes
it scared me,
awed me
the fierceness with which i felt
for you, and still do;
would tear apart the things
that dared
to hurt you
subtle
or unsubtle.
you grow
a wisdom bloom
searching out a hidden sun
with sun
and shadow face;
climbing
uncertain
in the concrete pillowscape
of youthful things.
grown now
but growing still
Copyright ©
zelator
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2008-05-23 16:14:47]
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Re: nicola
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by scarletbloom on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 05:59:09 PM AEST
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| it's like a wonderful moment is frozen in this poem.....good job dear! |
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Re: nicola
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by Muinanyere on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 06:07:51 AM AEST
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| aww this is so sweet :) |
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