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Angels biting
Contributed by
safetyinnumbers
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Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 10:29:26 AM in AEST
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Did you see the angels
Biting at my ankles?
Making me see things
That I didn’t want to see
Breaking all the shackles
Of all my thoughts of life
Licking at my open wounds
And detailing a truth inside.
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Re: Angels biting
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by shelby on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 10:30:43 AM AEST
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Incredible write, better angels than little devil nipping right?
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Re: Angels biting
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by brew on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 11:38:01 AM AEST
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Always an angel to guide......Yes, there are
I beleive, and I can say I have had a few as being an angel for a few. beautiful write
brew~ |
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Re: Angels biting
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by deadwriter on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 09:25:39 PM AEST
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Great write. So often we do not want to have them around, but they are there for a good reason.
Deadwriter
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Re: Angels biting
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by Supercreep on
Wednesday, 18th June 2008 @ 12:18:27 AM AEST
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| Like the way this introduces a novel slightly surreal idea that angels bite, in a matter of fact way, as if this was almost a self evident fact. This poems is subsinct and delightfully eery. A good read. Suppose Devils are really a kind of Angel, when you come to think about it.. |
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