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You
Contributed by
xoBrokenxo
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Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 07:47:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You used to be the highlight of my day.
But now, when it comes to you, I don’t know what to say.
People think I’ve cried for you,
But that’s not true.
I’ve cut for you,
That’s what’s really true.
My world used to revolve around you;
You were all that mattered…
Even after my heart shattered.
No matter what,
I’ll still love you.
No matter how much pain you cause me,
I’ll never see.
Fixed on you, can’t move on, can’t let go.
I can’t seem to say no.
I’m destroying myself very slowly.
And you can’t even see that.
I doubt you’d ever care.
You don’t notice that I’m there.
But that’s good.
Because the day I finally leave,
You won’t feel a thing.
Copyright ©
xoBrokenxo
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2008-05-23 07:47:34]
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Re: You
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by Muinanyere on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 08:06:09 AM AEST
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| This is so painful, I feel the same way. Very well written. |
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Re: You
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by Puppy on
Saturday, 24th May 2008 @ 04:04:37 AM AEST
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I really felt for you as i read the poem..don't ever feel like giving up its never the answer! It maybe hard now but as time goes on the pain does get easier to deal with....trust me.......
Puppy :) |
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Re: You
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by HonestInk on
Sunday, 25th May 2008 @ 10:15:57 AM AEST
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| Some people have the ability to make you feel like your only choice is to give up forever. Take it from someone who has been there, nobody is worth that. Stay strong and keep writing, it's very good! |
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