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Rock Bottom
Contributed by
6whiteRoses
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Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 05:38:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Day after day
I try and I try
But I'm starting to feel
I will never get by
My hurdles are high
My strength is so low
I just sit here and cry
And wait for the blow
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6whiteRoses
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2008-05-23 05:38:39]
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by Muinanyere on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 06:10:01 AM AEST
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| I love how short this is yet so powerful. Good write, hang in there. |
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 12:14:18 PM AEST
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Good write.... I can identify...
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Re: Rock Bottom
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 12:58:18 PM AEST
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Sometimes the fewer the words, the more powerful the feeling. As is with this one.
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