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An Angel Walked This Planet

Contributed by Emmaxbaby on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 02:52:37 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

An angel walked this planet,
Alone,
Afraid,
Abandoned.

She wished for love,
Wailing,
Waiting,
Wanting.

She dreamed of him,
Delightful,
Dreamy,
Devilish

He came along,
Charming,
Courageous,
Clever.

They loved,
Longingly,
Lustful,
Lovingly.

They Cuddled,
Closely,
Comfortingly,
Carefree.

They kissed,
Kindly,
Keenly,
Kissable.

He held her,
Heroically,
Honoured,
Heartfelt.

He made her life perfect,
Magical,
Marvellous,
Merry.

He walked away,
Wishing,
Waiting,
Wanting.

She sat alone,
Screaming,
Sniffling,
Shaky.

An angel walked this planet,
Alone,
Afraid,
Abandoned.

Copyright © Emmaxbaby ... [ 2008-05-23 02:52:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: An Angel Walked This Planet (User Rating: 1 )
by 6whiteRoses on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 05:44:05 AM AEST
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This was filled with much emotion, great work!

Kat

Re: An Angel Walked This Planet (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 07:18:06 AM AEST
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This is really wonderful, keep up the good work.

Re: An Angel Walked This Planet (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 10:51:32 AM AEST
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I found this interesting, I love the way in which it is written it fit it perfectly.

Michelle

Re: An Angel Walked This Planet (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 11:49:45 AM AEST
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I loved the structure used in this.. Lovely write.
Jenni

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