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Untitled
Contributed by
jv2543
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Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 10:51:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When we met,
I looked at you...
But out the corner of my eye
Not telling a soul
For you see I was far too shy.
Wondering if you’d seen me to
Not thinking to much about it
Knowing It’s always too good to be true.
To my surprise
I had caught your eye
Had you wondering
What I was hiding inside
At first glance,
Wasn’t sure If it was true romance.
But I went along anyway
Curiosity had gotten the best of me
And I just had to see
What this man had in store for me
Now I look into your eyes
and I get mesmerized
Explosions of love,
that are best described
as one of a kind.
Your hand in mine
Suspended in time
The feelings I have for you
Will forever shine.
Copyright ©
jv2543
... [
2008-05-22 22:51:15] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by 6whiteRoses on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 05:36:48 AM AEST (User
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This was beautiful!!!! It reminds me of when my boyfriend and I met, but on our 1 year anniversary -4/8 of this year- he asked me to marry him. I hope your relationship stays strong!
Many Blessings,
Kat |
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 01:44:43 PM AEST (User
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I just love poetry like this. Your words are wonderfully romantic. Thanks for sharing.....Mike |
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