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Rain

Contributed by alibof10 on Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 08:17:36 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles





Standing in the middle of the rain
How can I get rid of my pain?
Do I have enough self-esteem?
To raise my head high and follow my dream?

Why doesn’t anyone hear my cry?
Why do I feel like I have to die?
Why are you so hard on me, life?
Why are you such a strive?

Is being simple too much to ask for?
Being normal is locked behind that huge door
I have hit the floor
While trying not to adore…

Death seems like the only escape
From this non-appealing fate
I try to think it’s not too late
And that future can be changed
It’s waiting for me to write it down
But all I do is hit the ground

It’s too hard, escaping destiny
Wishing to live in harmony
Pleading that life’s un-stoppable army
Would let go of my soulless body
But that won't happen .. will it now …
Life had worn me down …

Join me in my dance of death …
Join me as I walk to hell’s depth!




Copyright © alibof10 ... [ 2008-05-22 08:17:36]
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Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Muinanyere on Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 08:19:53 AM AEST
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This was very well written, I know how you feel a little bit. Hang in there.


Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 08:45:00 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this to some extent, tho I found some of the rhymes sounded forced...
Jenni


Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Saaaraxxx16 on Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 09:17:31 AM AEST
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i understand exactly how you feel. its so hard living in this world when all you want is to escape from the world. great write. u captured so much emotion keep writing =)


Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 09:47:34 AM AEST
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In going through some very difficult and horrific struggles in my own life right now I am finding that inside the darkness we can find a small glimmer of light and love and hope. We must fight for it when we are so down and injured and hurting so badly we can hardly remain standing on our feet day to day......

This poem made me sad to read it but I feel it right now I truly do. Hang in there and dont let go!

Hugssss

Michelle


Re: Rain (User Rating: 1 )
by breezyweezy on Sunday, 15th June 2008 @ 08:12:28 PM AEST
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i havent exactly felt like you have, but i was close to it, i kno there is a lot of stress when u feel that way because one of my best frends feels the same way, i just try to be there for her and keep her going, i hope you have someonethere for you too, it helps :] great right, keep it up

breeze




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