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~Starve the pain~
Contributed by
shelby
on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 07:42:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She danced in the rain of her tears
Lingering in the forest beneath the shady pine.
Whispers of her heart floating lightly on soft wind
Destruction round the bend, the forest sucks her in
You could hear her breaking, you could feel the ache
Justice she pleaded for on her hands and knee’s
Her feelings of being forsaken she could not shake
Peace will come with an end, begging for it once more
One last time, stay the day starve the pain that darkened the way.
She knew she was a mere ghost floating above the ground
People saw through her and never really could see
Her beauty and her heart so full of life and love
She felt a hand lifting her, there is no end a voice said
You are free to shine once more
shelby
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2008-05-22 07:42:45]
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Re: ~Starve the pain~
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by Muinanyere on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 07:45:51 AM AEST
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| Wow, this is incredible. It made me want to cry (in a good way I suppose.) My life is a lot like this right now. Really good write! |
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Re: ~Starve the pain~
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 08:48:50 AM AEST
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As you know, I am no lover of dark poems..but I found this to be enthralling....
Jenni |
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Re: ~Starve the pain~
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by deadwriter on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 11:24:20 AM AEST
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My friend Shelby......You will always shine bright to my eyes, no matter the instance, never an ending. Your light has shown me the path on more than one occassion. Thank you for sharing yourself with us.
Deadwriter
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Re: ~Starve the pain~
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by ratty on
Friday, 23rd May 2008 @ 09:13:47 AM AEST
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| Great Great Great!! enjoyed reading this |
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