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Hurtful Love
Contributed by
funnyface09
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Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 04:11:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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A knife piercing through my skin
I felt nothing
No pain at all
I dropped to my knees
The blood on the floor
Trickling down from my hand
Soaking the carpet
With dark red blood
I wanted to feel pain
I just wanted to feel something
To take away the heartache in my heart
To take away the pain of losing you
The blood is still trickling down
My eyes are getting heavier
I smiled as I remember you
Your smile, your everything
I love you
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2008-05-21 16:11:19]
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Re: Hurtful Love
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by -Nik-91- on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 08:49:48 PM AEST
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wow thats heavy
really good write
alot of people cut thierselves to take thier mind off the pain of the heartache
but in time it gets better and you find some one who deserves you and you learn to love again
but the first step is the hardest and that is to let go of the past
keep writting if you need anyone to talk to im on normally every other day
Nikki xxxx |
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Re: Hurtful Love
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 10:28:36 PM AEST
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A straigtforward write that captures the essence of self harming.
Bleed the love, I say.
Spike |
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Re: Hurtful Love
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by Arijadna77 on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 04:24:35 PM AEST
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| i wish i didn't read this,and im glad i did...someone gave me that pain lately,and i feel ur poem,i sense it so deep... |
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