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Silently I'm Suffering
Contributed by
jessb3
on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 11:03:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I’m sitting at my desk
With dull unseeing eyes
Silently I’m suffering
Will no one hear my cries?
My exterior is porcelain
No one else can see
That deep within my soul
There’s a mess inside of me
Constantly they’re battling
The head against the heart
Confusion always reigns supreme
I don’t know where to start
Questions….never-ending
A stomach tied in knots
Emotions always uncontrolled
I can’t escape my thoughts
Hold him close or let him go?
No answer will succeed
For one will only cause me pain
And the other makes him bleed
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Re: Silently I'm Suffering
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 11:20:46 AM AEST
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Wow...you've described these feelings so vividly.....Great write...I love it!!
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Re: Silently I'm Suffering
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 11:48:25 AM AEST
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| deep write, but i like it, it fits what im coping with right now to the te,awesome work. |
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Re: Silently I'm Suffering
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by Chamaron on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 12:30:44 PM AEST
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| Fantastic flow and accurate portrayal. Well done. |
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Re: Silently I'm Suffering
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by Muinanyere on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 08:09:29 AM AEST
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| This is incredible, I'm sorry he doesn't feel the same I know how that feels all too well. Hang in there. |
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Re: Silently I'm Suffering
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by Richard1506 on
Wednesday, 24th June 2009 @ 09:27:17 AM AEST
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| Beautiful. You have captured the essence of unrequited love, hidden, yet overwhelming. I hope the story ends in happiness. |
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