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Dawn
Contributed by
Chamaron
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Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 11:01:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A smile dawning across your face,
That sideways look I can’t replace.
Your annoying laugh I love somehow,
That worry melting off your brow.
The warmth of your hand inside mine,
That tone of voice that tastes like wine.
How you notice before I say a thing,
The way that our silences can sing.
That innocent sweetness I can see,
The way that you always stand by me.
How you look at me with those eyes,
Falling in love as doubt quickly dies.
Copyright ©
Chamaron
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2008-05-21 11:01:30]
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Re: Dawn
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 12:02:03 PM AEST
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Flowing and beautiful write.
That tone of voice that tastes like wine...... I like that is stands out something different.
Entire write is a melody great job.
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Re: Dawn
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 10:35:36 PM AEST
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Awhhh... so sweet. Ah, the flush of young love.
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Re: Dawn
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by vampyrekiss on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 12:31:04 AM AEST
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| great, full of the emotion love it |
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Re: Dawn
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by Balmain_Tiger on
Friday, 26th December 2008 @ 06:22:10 AM AEST
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Very nice read that touched me in places I publicly admit not to have.
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