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WHY DO YOU HATE ME SO?
Contributed by
deadwriter
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Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 06:16:42 AM in AEST
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Why Do You Hate Me So?
May I ask you a question that has been on my mind?
What were you looking for in me that you did not find?
What expectation did I fail to meet?
What kept me from sweeping you off your feet?
What gives you the right to look straight through me?
Who is it that you are desperately hoping to see?
What have I done to make you hate me so?
Why every time I open a door out the other you go?
I will not walk away without an answer from you
I believe this is the least that you can do
Tell me the things you need to get off your chest
Then I will go rot in Hell, but I will be at rest
So from my high horse this knight you finally did knock
I guess it should not come as that much of a shock
You sucked the life from my body and left me for dead
I should have thought less with my heart and more with my head
Deadwriter
05/20/2008
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Re: WHY DO YOU HATE ME SO?
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by Muinanyere on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 06:31:50 AM AEST
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| This is really good, good ryhming. Women can be really horrible and I'm sorry for that (I can say that since I am one). |
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Re: WHY DO YOU HATE ME SO?
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 06:34:30 AM AEST
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This is so heart wrenching. I can't imagine anyone hating you....Well written at any rate..
Jenni |
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 06:42:09 AM AEST
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This brought a couple tears. A sad sad write my friend. Poem is written as you always do with brilliance........ I do not hate you my friend.
super huggersssss from the hugger machine lol
Michelle |
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Re: WHY DO YOU HATE ME SO?
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by SilverRain on
Wednesday, 21st May 2008 @ 11:18:27 PM AEST
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| Nicely captured. Love the last verse. Good job! |
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Re: WHY DO YOU HATE ME SO?
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by safetyinnumbers on
Thursday, 22nd May 2008 @ 10:40:01 AM AEST
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A good and honest write....strong and confronting....Nice write..... |
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Re: WHY DO YOU HATE ME SO?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th March 2009 @ 05:19:00 PM AEST
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| This is another excellent poem of yours. Sometimes I feel like screaming this question at some people in my Natural Resource class because they tend to be condensating towards me. But This my be the Aspergers screwing with me i don't know. But I do know that this is a great poem! |
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